Ielts Essay Band 8 Road Safety

The only way to improve road safety is to have stricter punishments for driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Hướng làm: Disagree – Counter argument = Balanced View

Dàn ý tham khảo:

Vocab : Road users, drivers, the law, license revoking, penalties , fines, transportation infrastructure, road qualities, public awareness campaigns, vehicle collisions, traffic accidents, car crashes, traffic-related deaths

Body 1: Admittedly, stricter punishments can significantly reduce traffic offenses. => become more aware of reckless driving / drunk driving / red light running, speeding => For example, since financial penalties for drunk driving in Vietnam doubled in 2019, the number of offenders has reduced significantly …

Body 2: However, imposing harsher punishments are insufficient to mitigate road accidents. => Financial penalties tend to exert negligible influence on the rich while imprisonment might place greater burdens on taxpayers => Other measures are equally effective and should be implemented => educational programs on driving safety for youth => run campaigns on mass media to raise public awareness about responsible driving…

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