The use of mobile phones in public places is as antisocial as smoking. Some people think that smoking is banned in certain public places, so mobile phones should be banned in the same way. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Hướng làm: Disagree – Counter-argument
In recent years, the use of mobile phones in public spaces has become a contentious argument. Some people claim that it is as antisocial as smoking and because smoking bans are enacted in many countries, mobile phone use should also be banned in certain public places. I disagree with this notion and this essay will elaborate on my reasons.
Admittedly, mobile phone use in public places might have detrimental impacts on individuals. Talking loudly, setting high-volume notification sounds or playing loud music on the phone might invade the privacy of others. Not to mention, these noises may make it hard for people to concentrate, especially in libraries or classrooms. Poor concentration would lead to stress and underperformance at work or study.
However, I believe using mobile phones in public places is not as harmful as smoking and therefore should not be prohibited. While smoking can pose serious health hazards such as increased risks of cancer and heart disease to others, such effects have not been found in mobile phone use. Furthermore, this gadget has become an integral part of people’s lives. People use it to work online and stay informed of the latest news, which is crucial for investors. It is also a multifunctional learning tool that allows people to read books or listen to educational podcasts on the way. Above all, mobile phones can become life-saving devices in emergency cases such as fire or crime. For these reasons, I opine that banning mobile phones in public spaces is unjustifiable. Instead, restrictions on certain functions such as talking or playing sounds loudly on the device should be imposed.
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