Some people think it is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor spaces such as squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Hướng làm : AGREE – không có COUNTER-ARGUMENT

BODY 1: Firstly (the first reason is that), having such spaces in urban areas can improve public HEALTH (individuals) => IDEAS : recreational activities such as …/ green space (nature)=> fresh air => relax, escape the hustle and bustle of city  life

BODY 2: Secondly, these places can help create STRONG / TIGHT-KNIT COMMUNITIES (society) =>  IDEAS: public events (1 – art & cultural activities: music concerts => opportunities to get to know other members in their community / their neighbors, make friends and expand their social circle  / 2 – family gatherings => strengthen their family bonds

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