Ielts Essay World History or Local History Band 8

Some people think that it is more important for children to learn about their local history than the world’s history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

HƯỚNG LÀM DISAGREE – EQUALLY IMPORTANT (đề có so sánh các bạn nên viết COUNTER-ARGUMENT)

SAMPLE BAND 8 FROM IELTS WRITING TASK 2 BOOK BY DUONG VU 8.0 WRITING

History has remained a controversial subject in school curricula. It is sometimes argued that students are better off learning about the history of their own country rather than the world’s history. I strongly disagree with this assertion and this essay will explain my reasons.

Admittedly, it is crucial for children to obtain insights into the bygone times of their homeland. Knowing how their nation was founded and how their ancestors had fought courageously against foreign invaders to protect their national independence might give people a strong sense of origin. They might also be inspired by great historical figures such as Napoleon or Abraham Lincoln, and thus be motivated to strive for meaningful accomplishments in life.

However, I firmly believe that learning about the history of the world is also equally important for young generations. As countries are becoming increasingly interconnected and interdependent, deep understandings of major historical events of the world as well as current relations between countries might result in well-informed decisions in business or other fields. Additionally, those who study global history tend to... =>

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