Some people think that the tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and other consumer goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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PARTLY AGREE:

It is sometimes argued that humans tend to emulate each other and this is commonly seen in the rising popularity of fashion clothes and other consumer products. I partly agree with this sentiment and this essay will elaborate on my reasons.

On the one hand, people are inclined (naturally tend) to mimic each other (main idea nên viết câu đơn).  Humans are social creatures and they need to be accepted by their peers in order to obtain/ gain a sense of belonging which is of paramount importance to their survival. When they strive to conform to the standards and norms of a community (A), they tend to dress and act / behave in the same way (B), leading to the popularity of certain types of clothes and daily used items (C). => *** Đây chính là cấu trúc: A dẫn đến B, B dẫn đến C: leading to/ , which leads to/ and this leads to) (=> link back sentence: PEEL structure)

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