Ielts Essay Multicultural Countries - IELTS IDV

Ielts Essay Multicultural Countries

Some people think that a country becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture of nationalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Paraphrase: multicultural society = heterogeneous society # homogeneous society

Dan y chi tiet by Duong Vu 8.5 Ielts:

Strongly Agree:  

Body 1: becomes more interesting: culturally diverse countries enable people to learn and experience different cultures =>  tangible: a wide range of foods to savor, various fashion styles  to try out  =>  intangible culture: fascinating traditions and festivals to celebrate and enjoy life  ;  values => gain broader perspectives

Body 2: Another reason is that countries with …. tend to develop more quickly: people from different cultures have different ways of thinking, meaning that they might have innovative / creative approaches to a problem. This may make it easier/ facilitate problem solving in businesses and organizations, which spurs their growth. For example, multinational companies often thrive faster than their domestic counterparts.

Furthermore, cultural diversity can promote the tourism industry/ sector of a nation and boost its economy significantly.

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