Some people think that a country becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture of nationalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Paraphrase: multicultural society = heterogeneous society # homogeneous society
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Body 1: becomes more interesting: culturally diverse countries enable people to learn and experience different cultures => tangible: a wide range of foods to savor, various fashion styles to try out => intangible culture: fascinating traditions and festivals to celebrate and enjoy life ; values => gain broader perspectives
Body 2: Another reason is that countries with …. tend to develop more quickly: people from different cultures have different ways of thinking, meaning that they might have innovative / creative approaches to a problem. This may make it easier/ facilitate problem solving in businesses and organizations, which spurs their growth. For example, multinational companies often thrive faster than their domestic counterparts.
Furthermore, cultural diversity can promote the tourism industry/ sector of a nation and boost its economy significantly.
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