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Ielts Essay Children Freedom Band 8

In some parts of the world, children are given more freedom than in the past. Is this a positive or negative development?

Dạng bài này các bạn viết như dạng Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages nhé:

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Positives

 

  • experience less pressure. can enjoy a happier childhood that is widely considered as the foundation for a fulfilling life . no restriction => grow to their full potential 
  • Obtain more autonomy => empower young people => might become more independent, confident and responsible when they grow up

 

Negatives

 

  • freedom to do whatever they want and hang out with whoever they like => negative role models => bad habits & reckless behavior (delinquency), at risk of crime and other safety problems

 

In conclusion, providing children with greater freedom might entail both benefits and drawbacks. If this freedom is given with careful guidance and clearly-set boundaries, however, it can be perceived as a welcomed development of modern parenting.  

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